Monday, 11 March 2013

Ruapehu Trip Similies

At Mount Ruapehu I felt as high as the sky, the mountains were as beautiful as a rose. I never wanted to leave.  I was like a giant, being so high in the sky.
The snow we saw was as white as the clouds so fluffy and textured yet so freezing cold.
I climbed Meads Wall and sat on a throne, so hard- as hard as rock.
As I looked over the edge I  felt I could fly like a bird if I jumped over, but if I had, in time I would be as flat as a pancake and as dead as a shoelace.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Helen
    I think you've shown how you can use similes in your work. Your next learning step is to use them with control.

    Stephanie

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